Netwriting

The end of the second collaborative adventure.
Netwriters and netesritores will go on with more stories they are writing...


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... there was a hole in the ground. Suddenly she slipped down the hole. She was in a different place covered in black and white stuff. It was a world of aliens.
As she turned a corner she came across a massive alien family. They were a mixture of one being fat and green, another being thin and red. The rest were bright orange and dark yellow.
When the aliens saw Angel they stared at her for a long time. Suddenly she found herself on the street by her home. She was very shocked but was able to make her way home. She kept the secret to herself and lived happily ever after.

(Samantha and Sophie, 3th class, Heulfre Junior School, Denbigh North, Wales, UK)

That one is the second part of our collaborative story.
You are invited to reed the end tomorrow.
Those kids, netescritores and netwriters, are loving that collaborative adventure!


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She went through dark, small pathways fearing that savage animals might appear. She looked for someone who could help her find her way back home.
Down at the end of the pathway she found a very small and old house. It was abandoned. Angel Teddy thought that she could live there until she could find her way home.
When she went in the house she saw that it was very dirty and untidy. She cleaned and organized everything very well. The house was now very nice and clean and little Angel Teddy was so tired that she went to rest and fell asleep.
When she woke up?

(Ana, Joana, Cláudia, Eduardo, Joana Filipa e Vítor, 3.º ano, Escola E.B.1 Junqueira, Vila do Conde, PT)

That one is the first part of a new collaborative story.
Tomorrow you can reed the second part and after tomorrow the end.
Those stories are being constructed between kids, netescritores and netwriters.


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Once upon a time there was a teddy called Angle Teddy. She lived in a place. Her parents went out shopping, so Angel Teddy was all by herself. She went outside and looked around and found a magic button. She pressed it. Then a forest grew big and tall. She went to look inside but then she got lost!

(Samantha and Sophie, 3th class, Heulfre Junior School, Denbigh North, Wales, UK)

Hello friends!
You remember, don't you?
Now we have the end of the story.
If you want you can have a look at the Portuguese version.



George lived with his mum and dad and his big sister Bethany.
It was George's 7th birthday and he was given a book called "Art Attack". He had a poster of his favourite football team, England, and a computer game. It was a really hot day and mum said:
- We are all going on a picnic!
George and Bethany cheered and were really excited:
- You're the best mum and dad, "fanjollytastic".
Mum made ham sandwiches and lemon cakes. She put everything in a picnic basket. Everyone got into the car and drove to the park where they found a place to have their picnic.
While George was eating his sandwich he saw a poster saying "Come to Billy's circus".
- Can we go mum? - George asked.
They all decided to go and have a look at the poster and, when they returned a few minutes later, they all had a fright. Eating their sandwiches was a grizzly bear.
- What are we going to do? - George cried.

(writen by Shannon and Paige, 3th class, Heulfre Junior School, Denbigh North, Wales, UK )

- Stay calm my son. - said mum.
- I know what we should do. - added daddy.
- What!? What!? - asked Bethany.
But, before daddy could answer, the bear made a strange noise and started looking in a strange way at the sandwich. He threw it in the air and George understood that the bear could be vegetarian and shouted:
- This bear is V-E-G-E-T-A-R-I-A-N!
- Are you crazy or what? - shouted Bethany - A vegetarian bear? Where has this type of animal been seen before?
- It can be true. - said a calmed down mum.
- George watches a lot of TV. Maybe he is right. Could it happen that there are vegetarian bears? - added daddy.

(writen by Ana, Joana, Claudia, Eduardo, Joana Filipa and Vi­tor, 3th class, Escola E.B. 1 Junqueira, Vila do Conde, PT)

What they did not know was that the bear was from a circus.
They asked the bear:
- Where do you live?
The bear said:
- In the circus-
- We will take you back there then.
They took the bear to the circus and he was soon scoffing fruit . They left him there back in his home where he was happy.
When the children arrived home they went to bed and dreamt about the bear.

(writen by Shannon and Paige, 3th class, Heulfre Junior School, Denbigh North, Wales, UK )